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Reset (orignal by Kage)

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B.
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--- yo's! so this is a "remake" from Kage's "Reset", I think I'm gonna make a comic out of this! plz comment ---

?Let?s make a promise
To meet again,?
We trace out pinkies
To never forget,

But now you?re gone,
Never to return
You?ll never know the pain,
That causes so much hurt

Reset the sadness
Red tears rain down pale cheeks
Reset the pain
Like a knife with sharp peaks
Reset it all, nothing else matters

We meet again,
Many years pass by
You came up to me,
And say your usual ?hi?

Reset.

Reset the happiness,
A cute smile, dimples upon those cheeks
Reset the warmth
Like a blanket, your arms over me
Reset it all, nothing else matters

?Let?s make a promise
To meet again,?
We trace out pinkies
To never forget,

We meet again,
Many years pass by
You came up to me,
And say your usual ?hi?

A cute smile, dimples upon those cheeks
Like a blanket, your arms over me
Reset it all, nothing else matters?

Posted 2 years ago #
Star
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It's nice, if not a bit confusing. ^^

Posted 2 years ago #
B.
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that's why, hopefully making it a comic might be good ^^

Posted 2 years ago #
Kagexetteko
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I think you mixed up the verses.

Anyway, you guys should've realize that I like to do dark-themed things by now.
I guess it's how I deal with the way I handle reality.

To be honest I got this inspired by a actual song already sung by a professional singer.
Only the title and one line from the song is the same (I hope it's not copying).

Here's my original(Exactly)...

"Reset"
Let's make a promise
To meet again
We trace our pinkies
To never forget

But now you're gone
Never to return
You'll never know the pain
That tore me apart

Reset the sadness
Red tears rain down pale cheeks
Reset the pain
Razor dagger with sharp peaks
Reset it all, nothing else matters

I saw you again
You're now distant
Never even say 'hi'
Just pass me by

I stand by
And watched you change
I never knew
You had pain as well

Reset the sadness
Red tears rain down pale cheeks
Reset the pain
Razor dagger with sharp peaks
Reset it all, nothing else matters

We meet again
You said 'sorry'
I said 'I forgive'
'Then, can we start all over?'

Reset the Happiness
Smiles and dimples upon my face
Reset the warmth
Your arms blanketed around me
Reset it all, because it does matter

Reset it all

Okay, there.
Real song: Reset
Singer: Ayaka Hirahara

Posted 2 years ago #
Star
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Thanks for clearing that up Kage, it's awesome. ^^ I think making it into a comic is a great idea Konoha. :3

Posted 2 years ago #
B.
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IDK. This was when Kage didn't have her Original and just told me what she remembered and I just wrote it down and tried to improv. it.
I like mine though... may wanna switch a few lines that sound confusing though.

Posted 2 years ago #
Kagexetteko
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I actually fixed mine over again.
It's up to you though Konoha.

But it's best if you have your own version so it's not the exact same and it
doesn't gets confusing of which one belongs to which ever writers.

Posted 2 years ago #
B.
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I still kinda like mine better. Only, I don't like the lines about the "knife and peaks" part. It sounds weird.

Posted 2 years ago #
Star
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Well I like Kage's better but if you're going to make a comic out of it I suggest using your own. :P

Posted 2 years ago #
B.
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.... yeah... okay, whatever.

Posted 2 years ago #