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Kagexetteko
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I had been looking at scenes from 'Metroid Prime 3 Corruption' on youtube.
(awesome game 8) )
The subtitle 'Corruption' give me a idea so I decided to try it out.

I fixed this song.
The first version was way too dark... Removed it.
Made it as a illness or some kind of mental instability instead.
Still keeping the title but not going for rhyming.(so tedious)

"Corruption"
I look at myself in the mirror
A gut feeling overwhelms me
There is a strange person there
And IT is not at all ME

The horror I've become
From within my insides

My smile widens
Slick tongue and gleaming teeth
My eyes narrows
Hollow and dim ever lifeless
What is this sickness in me?
This cancerous matter of Corruption!

I feel like throwing up
Watching black blood gushing out
My head high with fever
Like white fire crushing with it's claws

This terror that haunts me
Mutated me from inside out

My heart is compressed
Hands grasping and tearing
My mind has ruptured
Overflowing emotions rips through
How much more of this can I take?
This cancerous matter of Corruption!

Corruption enters my mind, heart and soul
I watched myself sink into further darkness
No sin can ever go unpunished
But there can still be atonement
I fight my way out from this curse
I will not let the Corruption claim me

My body twists and churns
Cancerous and full of viruses
My soul struggling through
Haunting and tauntingly in pain
Can't you see me changed?
This cancerous matter of Corruption!

Black tears wash away
My red stains on my hands
White fire burns in my soul
Melting my blue heart
Is it finally over?
Can this really end?
This cancerous matter of Corruption!

What is this sickness in me?
How much more of this can I take?
Can't you see me changed?
This cancerous matter of Corruption!

Is it finally over?
Can this really end?
This cancerous matter of Corruption!

Status: ... DONE! ... 8)

Here's a treat for you guys.
MP3C link: http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=iCz6d9P34rA&feature=PlayList&p=357661AD243F8238&index=0&playnext=1
(sorry... long link)

Vocaloid link: http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=InyjQ-Dplw0

Posted 7 months ago #
B.
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wow... dark Kage, but dang I really like it!

Posted 7 months ago #
Star
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Yes, very dark. I would like it a lot more if I heard it though...

Posted 7 months ago #
Kagexetteko
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I'm thinking about making some songs too.
Just for a hobby and for Vocaloid.

I don't really have much talent in music,
But it's a big part of my life and others so I might as well do something more with it.

Did you know that the Final Fantasy composer didn't know anything about music
just before he became one?
He went to a concert and just suddenly got inspired.

Posted 7 months ago #
B.
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hahahahah, that's what we call a total GENUIS!
I Love Nobou, his work is the BEST! Even though One Winged Angel freaks me out a bit... but damn, he's good...

Kage should do the same too!

Posted 7 months ago #
Star
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I think that would be fun Kage. :3 Good luck and be sure to let me hear it when it's done!

Posted 7 months ago #
B.
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yes, remember to let us listen to your demo.

Posted 7 months ago #
Kagexetteko
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Well, I don't have much talent for music but I'll be practicing.

Posted 7 months ago #
B.
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don't worry. It doesn't take talent to be a genuis. It just takes determination and brains!

Posted 7 months ago #
Kagexetteko
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Thanks Konoha.

Posted 7 months ago #